Question

[Cold Wind]

Help me with correcting the grammar mistakes in this passage, please ^^! Thank you very very much!

Passage about the weather forecats in Vietnam:

In Hanoi and North Vietnamese plains, it will be quite cold and foggy. The temperature will be from 14 to 20 degree centigrade. You should wear coat and turn on the motorbike's light when go out. Don't forget towarm the elderly people and the children.

The provinces from Thanh Hoa to Binh Dinh as Nghe An, Ha Tinh and Quan Binh, the weather will be cloudy and wet. Somewhere can be rainy. The low will be 23 and the high will be 30 degree centigrade. When you need go out, you should bring umbrella or raincoat.

In plateau area in central Vietnam, the weather will be very nice. It will be cool and windy a whole day. The low will be 15 and the high will be 20 degree centigrade. This will be a wonderful time to go for a picnic. Hope you will have a happy time with your family and your friends.

With the South, daytime will be sunny and baking hot, the night will be rainy and cold. The low will be 12 and the high will be 40 degree centigrade. With this kind of weather, the children and the elderly people will be sick easily, so you must take care of them carefully.

(còn phần thời tiết biển đảo chưa viết nữa T_T!!! Mn sửa lỗi giúp nha!!!!!!^^!)

Answer 1

[Nguyễn Thị Thu Trang]

In Hanoi and North Vietnamese plains, it will be quite cold and foggy. The temperature will be from 14 to 20-degree centigrade. You should wear a coat and turn on the motorbike's light when going out. Don't forget to warm the elderly people and the children.

The provinces from Thanh Hoa to Binh Dinh as Nghe An, Ha Tinh and Quan Binh, the weather will be cloudy and wet. Somewhere can be rainy. The low will be 23 and the high will be 30-degree centigrade. When you need to go out, you should bring umbrella or raincoat.

In plateau area in central Vietnam, the weather will be very nice. It will be cool and windy a whole day. The low will be 15 and the high will be 20-degree centigrade. This will be a wonderful time to go for a picnic. Hope you will have a happy time with your family and your friends.

With the South, daytime will be sunny and baking hot, the night will be rainy and cold. The low will be 12 and the high will be 40 degree centigrade. With this kind of weather, the children and the elderly people will be sick easily, so you must take care of them carefully.

Mk sửa hết rùi đó. Nhìn chung bài viết của bn khá tốt chỉ có những mistakes khá nhỏ thôi.

Answer 2

[Thanh Trà]

In Hanoi and North Vietnamese plains, it will be quite cold and foggy. The temperature will be from 14 to 20 degree centigrade. You should wear coat and turn on the motorbike's light when go out. Don't forget to warm the elderly people and the children.

The provinces from Thanh Hoa to Binh Dinh as Nghe An, Ha Tinh and Quang Binh, the weather will be cloudy and wet. Somewhere can be rainy. The low will be 23 and the high will be 30 degree centigrade. When you need go out, you should bring umbrella or raincoat.

In plateau area in central Vietnam, the weather will be very nice. It will be cool and windy a whole day. The low will be 15 and the high will be 20 degree centigrade. This will be a wonderful time to go for a picnic. Hope you will have a happy time with your family and your friends.

With the South, daytime will be sunny and baking hot, the night will be rainy and cold. The low will be 12 and the high will be 40 degree centigrade. With this kind of weather, the children and the elderly people will be sick easily, so you must take care of them carefully.

Chưa chắc đúng.Chỗ in đậm là chỗ đã dc sửa lại